at once, but not yet
history and fantasy
eternal riddle
eternal riddle
witnessed, but unseen
granite and ethereal
eternal comfort
Daily Haiku #27
Word Challenge: eternity
The Haiku Challenge
Daily Haiku #27
Word Challenge: eternity
The Haiku Challenge
14 comments-
Olivia said on February 27, 2011
Mind blowing- make it 3 times mind blowing!! The image made me curious and I couldn't wait to read.
Lovely Sunday
Love xox
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chocolatebarsforthoughts said on February 27, 2011
Thanks, Olivia! I couldn't believe the image was so perfect. Thanks for dropping by.
Shalom.
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honeyhaiku said on February 27, 2011
It is fantastic. Words so beautiful crafted for a hypnotic haiku!
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Mike Patrick said on February 27, 2011
Wonderful, but I don't pretend to understand Dali, but then again, that’s why "enigma" is in the title.
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Becca Givens said on February 27, 2011
Awesome three-part Haiku! ~becca~
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Victoria C. Slotto said on February 27, 2011
Lovely...and the music from my favorite Enya CD. Yes!
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lolamouse said on February 27, 2011
The Dali picture was perfect for your haiku! Very enigmatic, both. Loved it!
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Life: Between the lines said on February 27, 2011
This is awesome with a surreal quality to it very nice!
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danroberson said on February 27, 2011
Like the rings of circles, endless and reaching,
History and fantasy, eternally teaching.
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sonsy lass said on February 27, 2011
I liked the use of the contrasting descriptions of time very much - interesting and intriguing haiku!
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Jingle Poetry said on February 27, 2011
wow..
rocking Haikus.
:)
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Finer Friday said on February 27, 2011
Nice Haiku ! Just tell me what part you want to do in finer friday!
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chocolatebarsforthoughts said on February 27, 2011
#2, #3, or #5.
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Someone is Special said on February 28, 2011
Nice one.. Thanks for the smiles..
Someone is Special
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