1.
one fine brow arches
disbelief fills the senses
skepticism reigns
2.
burqa reveals eyes
illumining sacred soul
and we judge harshly
3.
I AM in your eyes
I AM in your hands and feet
I AM in your heart
13But Moses said to God, “If I come to the Israelites and say to them, ‘The God of your ancestors has sent me to you,’ and they ask me, ‘What is his name?’ what shall I say to them?” 14God said to Moses, “I AM WHO I AM.” He said further, “Thus you shall say to the Israelites, ‘I AM has sent me to you.’“ Exodus 3:13-14
Daily Haiku #6
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Your poem, consisting of three haikus, is excellent.
Thanks, Dan. I appreciate it.
fabulous trio, loved them all. first one was cool, second one pristine and the third one sweet. 🙂
Thank you!
the last one’s my fav. nice work!
Interesting trio. In the first, you read kinesics. In the second, you read the soul. In the third, you read the word of God. A meaningful progression. Very enjoyable.
Deep breath… oh, the last haiku went straight to my heart. Thank you!
Thank you so much. I think it is my heart.
sweet..
I love each one, nicely done! 🙂 http://lynnaima.wordpress.com
lovely trio
it is the second that resonated mot with me
Bravo! Love the progression here. Well thought out. Well written.
What can I say here? No words will suffice this work.. Hats off..Pleasure to have you in the challenge..
Someone is Special
the second and third really were wonderful for me we as humans should not judge at all and yet we do great messages