the wrong side of the tracks

11 comments

  1. danroberson said on February 28, 2011
    I was raised on the wrong side the right way. Found my way across but lost my way and found out the wrong side is the easier of the two to get back to the main track.
  2. chocolatebarsforthoughts said on February 28, 2011
    My general thought was that the suspicion and pain is on both sides. We just think it is on one side.
  3. Nanka said on February 28, 2011
    That was an interesting take for the prompt and you have done it well!! Thank you for your visits and I enjoyed reading and sharing at the challenge!!
    1. chocolatebarsforthoughts said on February 28, 2011
      Thanks, Nanka. It has been a wonderful time.
  4. ladynimue said on February 28, 2011
    A sad but true picture etched in words ..
    1. chocolatebarsforthoughts said on February 28, 2011
      Yes. It is sad that do this to ourselves.
  5. Kristen Haskell said on February 28, 2011
    And each day that we try to make a difference in another person's life we get a tiny bit closer to closing the gap. Peace be with you.
    1. chocolatebarsforthoughts said on February 28, 2011
      And also with you! You are so right. We can help stitch the tracks back together. Or maybe it is more like a zipper?
  6. Becca Givens said on February 28, 2011
    Powerful Haiku finale ... I am grateful the challenge introduced me to your work! Thank you, becca
  7. Life: Between the lines said on February 28, 2011
    I like the twist on the prompt.... totally unique :)
  8. Jingle said on March 1, 2011
    strong imagery... well done. :)

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