March 18: Cosmos

Outer Space
The 10 Most Awesome Photos from Space
star stuff

dna star stuff
pulses in our chest
like neutrons skittering
calling to the bang
that was
in the beginning
portending the omega
peeling apart time
like an onion
revealing with tears
the multiverse that
is teeming with life
and time that was
and will be
all wrapped up in a
dry and shiny skin
holding us together but
flaking off as roots
grow into the garden
bin and asteroids shoot
overhead
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March 18 Challenge:  Today marks the first walk in space. Reflect on the cosmos.
Please add your link in the comments or paste your submission into the comments.  Be a good neighbor and visit and comment on other folk’s works!
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P.S.  A compilation of all links can be found here.

Today’s Postings:

18 comments

  1. honeyhaiku said on March 17, 2011
    Magically poetic! I love it. http://honeyhaiku.wordpress.com/2011/03/17/higgs-boson/
  2. goldenhairbear10 said on March 17, 2011
    http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/03/14/wondrous/
  3. Becca Givens said on March 18, 2011
    Awesome!! http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/03/17/cosmos-flight/
  4. earlybird said on March 18, 2011
    I like the analogy of the onion. Here's my contribution: http://mangetoutetc.wordpress.com/2011/03/18/march-challenge/
  5. ladynimue said on March 18, 2011
    Lovely coupled universe and humans ! My post : http://ladynimue.wordpress.com/2011/03/18/cosmos/
  6. therummaker said on March 18, 2011
    hey a little bit of my thoughts :) http://therummaker.wordpress.com/2011/03/18/somethings-i-figured-lately/
  7. eclipseofthemoon said on March 18, 2011
    ....holding us together but flaking off as roots... love that
  8. Becca Givens said on March 18, 2011
    For the "other" cosmos ~ http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/03/17/love-flower/
  9. trisha said on March 18, 2011
    beautiful poem jane, loved it. trisha http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/03/16/cosmos/
  10. tigerbrite said on March 18, 2011
    http://planetcyberluz.com/2011/03/18/cosmos/ First try at the haiku. Loved the poem.
  11. Mike Patrick said on March 18, 2011
    Finally thought of something. http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/2011/03/18/the-music-of-the-cosmos/
  12. Renee said on March 19, 2011
    I like your writing Star Stuff....Awesome!! Words like a fountain pouring out. Thanks so much!
    1. Terri said on March 19, 2011
      thanks Renee.
  13. dani said on March 19, 2011
    i love every part of this from dna star stuff to the multiverse to asteroids shooting overhead. really magical! ♥
  14. dani said on March 19, 2011
    oops! forgot the link to my poem ~ http://haikulovesongs.wordpress.com/2011/03/18/stars-in-heaven/

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