illegal entry
betrayed
broken
ulcers
ugliness
raw
rage
gallows
garbage
leaving
living
accepting
activating
releasing
renewing
enduring
eclipsing
daring
daunting
broken
ulcers
ugliness
raw
rage
gallows
garbage
leaving
living
accepting
activating
releasing
renewing
enduring
eclipsing
daring
daunting
~Terri Stewart, December 2010
… delighted … Well done, Terri. Happy Rally …
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Such a feeling of being violated. Sorry you had to go through that. The words you chose expresses it well.
nice, cheers.
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You conveyed this raw and perfect!
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/12/29/new/
creative and playful words.
sad emotions yet beautifully told.
Thanks for the contribution.
have fun!
Your words is really wonderful and I love the creativeness of your poem. Love it.
Full of emotions.
Please check mine : http://meirozavian.wordpress.com/2010/12/29/water/
Thank you, have a nice new year!!
Wow. So many emotions in this — thank you for sharing.
Thanks, Becky!
creative and a wonderful work here.. the shape make it more catchy, nicely done.. Here is mine, ! Wishes !
Happy Rally !
Wish you a very Happy New Year 2011..
–Someone is Special–
Special,
Thank you for your thoughts!
Loved the way your placed the words to give even more form to their meaning.
Thanks so much!
You share the emotion of the experience very well, yet with beauty.
Good job! Happy Rally!
http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/nye/
Thank you, Marlee.
Beautifully expressed. I was robbed once, and you hit the nail on the head.
Thanks, Linda! Burglary is an insidious thing to happen. There are so many worse things in the world that it doesn’t seem quite so bad, but the sense of violation, irritation, and loss of faith and security just burns.
very creative presentation of a really tough situation — you wrote it beautifully
Thank you, Louise.
Very well done!
Thank you, Ina.
Interesting. :0)
Anita.
http://anitaspoetry.blogspot.com/2010/12/poison.html
Thank you, Anita.
Wow, so cool and I like how us used formatting on this poem to help create the mood you were going for!
Thoughtsnotlost, Thanks!
Fantastic presentation with a great arrangement of words for impact – lovely!
Thank you!
A definite assault, in words, in state and the read…well done!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
You betcha! Not something I am looking to experience again.
A fascinating shaped acrostic! Many pounding tensions in relentless flow!
Thank you.
Feelings flowing, anger growing, freedoms lost, at what cost, never forget, or regret, yet if you forgive, it won’t live, in your heart. Easier said than done.
You are so very right!
a delight to read…thanks!
Thanks!
wow.. Monk, this was amazing.. the structure and the double acrostic type poetry.. the choice of words.. very very beautiful 🙂
Thanks so much, Leo. You are very gracious.
Not welcomed visitors take every form and opportunity…
And just take.
🙂 This was fun to read. Thanks!
Thanks! I appreciate your comments.
wow… profound poem, really like your use of shape too. thanks for sharing.
Love and Light
Thank you, graceful glider!
I commend you on your self control. I would have used stronger adjectives.
Ha! That is the best laugh I have had about this since it happened.
Happy new year friend!
just one word — beautiful
Thanks, Meg! I find that if I can sit down and write it into something better (hopefully beautiful), it transforms ugly events into worthwhile experiences. The power of words.
Passionate write…thank you for sharing.
Thanks, David.
nice to see this poetry form done in a mature way. well done. sorry that this happened to you, though.
Thanks so much! I always worry when using “forms.”
cheers,
glad that you take some.
😉
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you must be feeling good to be playing with words like this haha! nice! mine for this thursday- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/