Hiding

22 comments

  1. honeyhaiku said on February 10, 2011
    W.O.W! This is fantastic...so poignant.
  2. Margaret Bednar said on February 10, 2011
    Love the whole thought of how she can't hide from "him". Nice.
  3. trisha said on February 10, 2011
    this was heart touching and very, very beautiful. trisha http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/10/blushing-in-dreams/
  4. Mike Patrick said on February 10, 2011
    Beautiful, I almost expected that last word to be capitalized.
    1. chocolatebarsforthoughts said on February 10, 2011
      Not capitalized yet! She is just discovering who he is.
  5. sarah malik said on February 10, 2011
    never read something like this...its different but poignantly crafted..lovely!
  6. PinkLady said on February 10, 2011
    i am impressed! this is so deep and beautiful. to love someone else is truly heartbreaking... :) http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/longing-for-you.html
  7. dan said on February 10, 2011
    Unconditional love is hard to maintain withouot reciprocation. Her desire is for romantic love and he doesn't hold her in this heart the same way.
  8. Jingle said on February 10, 2011
    love it, smart writing.
  9. Becca Givens said on February 10, 2011
    Tender love, and courage of exposure ... beautifully captured. Thank you! becca
  10. Bodhirose said on February 10, 2011
    No need to ever hide your eyes if you are truly and wholly loved. Well done--so many ideas are brought up to me as I read this.
  11. Nanka said on February 10, 2011
    Poignant and must be deeply distressing to her. Well expressed!!
  12. short poems said on February 10, 2011
    Touching and creative write, love it :)
  13. iblogmoore said on February 10, 2011
    this prompt is stirring such emotion from so many, these are romantic even sensuous wonderful work.
  14. Someone is Special said on February 11, 2011
    fantastic one.. Nice take on the theme.. Someone is Special
  15. Jingle said on February 13, 2011
    thanks for sharing... A++
  16. AzFree (Aleza) said on February 14, 2011
    Wow, true love is never dehydrating!
  17. Melissa said on February 14, 2011
    Beautifully penned.
  18. Victoria C. Slotto said on February 14, 2011
    Impressive take on the prompt.
  19. Shashi said on February 14, 2011
    Unless you are he... very beautiful. I enjoyed it so much.. lovely. ॐ नमः शिवाय Om Namah Shivaya http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html
  20. dancingfreak said on February 15, 2011
    oooooooooooo strong desires!!! lovely haiku
  21. Jaan Pehchaan said on February 15, 2011
    Dear Cloaked Monk Thirsting, Hiding, Lovely Poem Thoughtful, Intriguing

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