haze

12 comments

  1. danroberson said on February 25, 2011
    And in the cool of the day, all the animals come out to play.
  2. vivinfrance said on February 25, 2011
    gorgeous evocation
  3. trisha said on February 25, 2011
    we all were talking about mountain and height- you took the opposite stance. it was cool and beautiful CM. trisha http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/23/haze/
    1. chocolatebarsforthoughts said on February 25, 2011
      Never let it be said that I am not contrary! ;-) Thanks!
  4. Mike Patrick said on February 25, 2011
    I always expect great haiku from you, but you exceeded yourself today. I believe this is your best during the challenge. For some reason I found this to be exceptionally powerful. I believe it to be THE best of the challenge.
    1. chocolatebarsforthoughts said on February 25, 2011
      Wow. I am extremely flattered. Thank you so much, Mike.
  5. Victoria C. Slotto said on February 25, 2011
    Ooooh. The word undulates is so good. Makes me want to write a poem to go with it. Nice haiku.
  6. Becca Givens said on February 25, 2011
    "vapid waves" ~~ hmmmm!! Nice job with the prompt ... Thanks for sharing ~ becca ~ http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/25/through-the-haze/
  7. Jingle said on February 25, 2011
    fun one. :)
  8. Someone is Special said on February 26, 2011
    I loved the pic and the haiku.. Awesome.. Please visit this page for the grand Celebrations, it starts here Someone is Special
  9. dani said on February 27, 2011
    i love this haiku and it is a great pic, too. i live in the desert and, indeed, even the snakes and lizards seek whatever shade they can or go underground during the hottest part of the day. very nice.
  10. Life: Between the lines said on February 27, 2011
    the heat puts them all to rest...I like the idea emanating here, well done`

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