heat of summer’s sun
undulates with vapid waves
even reptiles rest
Daily Haiku #25
Word Challenge: Haze
The Haiku Challenge
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heat of summer’s sun
undulates with vapid waves
even reptiles rest
Daily Haiku #25
Word Challenge: Haze
The Haiku Challenge
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And in the cool of the day,
all the animals come out to play.
gorgeous evocation
we all were talking about mountain and height- you took the opposite stance. it was cool and beautiful CM.
trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/23/haze/
Never let it be said that I am not contrary! 😉
Thanks!
I always expect great haiku from you, but you exceeded yourself today. I believe this is your best during the challenge. For some reason I found this to be exceptionally powerful. I believe it to be THE best of the challenge.
Wow. I am extremely flattered. Thank you so much, Mike.
Ooooh. The word undulates is so good. Makes me want to write a poem to go with it. Nice haiku.
“vapid waves” ~~ hmmmm!!
Nice job with the prompt … Thanks for sharing ~ becca ~
http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/25/through-the-haze/
fun one.
🙂
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i love this haiku and it is a great pic, too. i live in the desert and, indeed, even the snakes and lizards seek whatever shade they can or go underground during the hottest part of the day. very nice.
the heat puts them all to rest…I like the idea emanating here, well done`