The rain
Brings news of pain
Of cosmos' every thought
Is writ upon the stain of turf
Befouled.
Shalom.
Inspired by Verse in a Nutshell prompt: Giving or receiving information
and by Poetic Bloomings: rain.
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May, 2011
The rain
Brings news of pain
Of cosmos' every thought
Is writ upon the stain of turf
Befouled.
Shalom.
Inspired by Verse in a Nutshell prompt: Giving or receiving information
and by Poetic Bloomings: rain.
7 comments-
Renee said on May 8, 2011
Very difficult to listen to the news so I agree with you there. Even the weather forecast is not without some trepidation somewhere in the world.
Well done!
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Pat Cegan said on May 8, 2011
Acid rain. Ugh! In New Jersey, the whites of the eyes of many people are yellow from the pollution. Poor plants. Nice treatment of the subject. I like your poem's conciseness. Hugs, pat
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Terri said on May 8, 2011
Thanks, Pat. That is pretty creepy about the yellow eyes.
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trisha said on May 9, 2011
this is beautiful!
trisha
http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com/2011/05/06/receiving-information-for-may-challenge/
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ladynimue said on May 11, 2011
Interesting thoguht .. painful to imagine the impact !
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Terri said on May 12, 2011
Yes. And yet the earth is pretty clear in her communication. Sad.
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