The rain
Brings news of pain
Of cosmos' every thought
Is writ upon the stain of turf
Befouled.
Shalom.
Inspired by Verse in a Nutshell prompt: Giving or receiving information
and by Poetic Bloomings: rain.
Earth’s Communication
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Very difficult to listen to the news so I agree with you there. Even the weather forecast is not without some trepidation somewhere in the world.
Well done!
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Acid rain. Ugh! In New Jersey, the whites of the eyes of many people are yellow from the pollution. Poor plants. Nice treatment of the subject. I like your poem’s conciseness. Hugs, pat
Thanks, Pat. That is pretty creepy about the yellow eyes.
this is beautiful!
trisha
http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com/2011/05/06/receiving-information-for-may-challenge/
Interesting thoguht .. painful to imagine the impact !
Yes. And yet the earth is pretty clear in her communication. Sad.