choir
luminous, radiant
soaring, cresting, whispering
petals of music floating to earth
gift
Terri Stewart, Dec. 2010
for Potluck Poetry
theme: hobbies, pastimes, entertainment
choir
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well said.
Petals of music… ahhh.
I love the cinquain, although I have yet to master it. Yours is sincere, not a false “note” in the entire poem.
Thank you. Found you on Jingle!
Amy Barlow Liberatore
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/the-precious-box-jingle-poetry-potluck/
Very well composed, I like the inclusion of ‘whispering’.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/ice-cream/
I think I’ll be visiting your blog a lot…enjoyed this and your “about.”
My potluck: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/on-reading-a-poem-for-poetry-potluck-and-monday-morning-writing-prompt/
Thanks so much! I am greatly flattered.
Charming! 🙂 happy potluck! http://inaweblogisback.wordpress.com/2010/12/10/haiku-or-naisaiku-or-senryu/
It truly is a gift, that’s for sure. You captured my choir experiences precisely. Well done.
Here’s mine:
http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/shadow-dance/
I heart cinquain.
I just love the structure.
I like this image!
good stuff
I am reminiscing about my years in the choir at Prep School…well done!
slick write!
ah, this is lovely. simple but very vivid…
Petals of music…elegant and precise.
I enjoyed this snow fall of beautiful words.. Thanks
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
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keep rocking…
A++
Lovely poem!
wow 🙂
So lovely!
“petals of music” -that’s beautiful!
I hope your daughter enjoys my anti-bullying poem–thanks so much for your comments on it–she can share it with her friends, that was the idea. I plan to use it when I read in classrooms/do poetry workshops.
Nice!
very nice and simple!