sometimes pruning
shears that cut
scattering debris willy nilly
are so dull that they hack
away leaving scars
behind that never quite heal
bypassing new growth
leaving deadened limbs that
will not weather the next storm.
Categories: Poetry
18
Dec, 2011
4 comments-
charlesmashburn said on December 19, 2011
I like this. Has a nice rhythm to it, and the underflying message is a good one.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/
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Summer said on December 19, 2011
well done message.
can't agree more.
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Life: Between the lines said on December 19, 2011
well said, best analogy to pain, wounds I have read in a very long time!!
happy gooseberry day!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/
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Morning said on December 22, 2011
lovely thoughts,
smart way to show pains.
stay blessed, happy holidays.
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