18 Dec, 2011 Terri sometimes pruning shears that cut scattering debris willy nilly are so dull that they hack away leaving scars behind that never quite heal bypassing new growth leaving deadened limbs that will not weather the next storm. Tags: children, poem, poetry, sad, social commentary, trees Categories: Poetry
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charlesmashburn said on December 19, 2011
I like this. Has a nice rhythm to it, and the underflying message is a good one.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/
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Summer said on December 19, 2011
well done message.
can't agree more.
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Life: Between the lines said on December 19, 2011
well said, best analogy to pain, wounds I have read in a very long time!!
happy gooseberry day!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/
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Morning said on December 22, 2011
lovely thoughts,
smart way to show pains.
stay blessed, happy holidays.
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