Three Reflections

eyes

1.
one fine brow arches
disbelief fills the senses
skepticism reigns

eyes

2.
burqa reveals eyes
illumining sacred soul
and we judge harshly

eyes

3.
I AM in your eyes
I AM in your hands and feet
I AM in your heart

13But Moses said to God, “If I come to the Israelites and say to them, ‘The God of your ancestors has sent me to you,’ and they ask me, ‘What is his name?’ what shall I say to them?” 14God said to Moses, “I AM WHO I AM.” He said further, “Thus you shall say to the Israelites, ‘I AM has sent me to you.’“  Exodus 3:13-14

Daily Haiku #6
Picture Challenge
The Haiku Challenge

 

14 comments

  1. dan said on February 6, 2011
    Your poem, consisting of three haikus, is excellent.
    1. Terri said on February 6, 2011
      Thanks, Dan. I appreciate it.
  2. sharmishtha said on February 6, 2011
    fabulous trio, loved them all. first one was cool, second one pristine and the third one sweet. :)
    1. Terri said on February 6, 2011
      Thank you!
  3. Dishilicious said on February 6, 2011
    the last one's my fav. nice work!
  4. Mike Patrick said on February 6, 2011
    Interesting trio. In the first, you read kinesics. In the second, you read the soul. In the third, you read the word of God. A meaningful progression. Very enjoyable.
  5. Julie Jordan Scott said on February 6, 2011
    Deep breath... oh, the last haiku went straight to my heart. Thank you!
    1. Terri said on February 6, 2011
      Thank you so much. I think it is my heart.
  6. Jingle said on February 6, 2011
    sweet..
  7. Life: Between the lines said on February 6, 2011
    I love each one, nicely done! :) http://lynnaima.wordpress.com
  8. otterblossom said on February 6, 2011
    lovely trio it is the second that resonated mot with me
  9. Jamie Dedes said on February 7, 2011
    Bravo! Love the progression here. Well thought out. Well written.
  10. Someone is Special said on February 7, 2011
    What can I say here? No words will suffice this work.. Hats off..Pleasure to have you in the challenge.. Someone is Special
  11. iblogmoore said on February 7, 2011
    the second and third really were wonderful for me we as humans should not judge at all and yet we do great messages

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