ninevah

9 comments

  1. Tharlam Gyatso said on February 18, 2011
    A fine Haiku. I loved the closing line.
  2. Life: Between the lines said on February 18, 2011
    We do rest underneath trees and take them for granted indeed, I enjoyed that part :)
  3. trisha said on February 18, 2011
    just gorgeous. beautiful portrayal of the scene. trisha http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/17/torn/
  4. danroberson said on February 18, 2011
    Beautiful in its tenacity to hold on against the odds, Offering shelter to life below, A lone sentinel leaning against the sky, If it can hold on, why can't I?
  5. sonsy lass said on February 18, 2011
    'taken for granted' - I found this phrase intriguing
  6. Kristen Haskell said on February 18, 2011
    It is the little things in nature we should recognize. The shade of a tree on a hot day, a cool brook with smooth stones to walk barefoot in, those things are glorious, as is your Haiku.
  7. Someone is Special said on February 19, 2011
    Awesome Haiku.. Cloakedmonk.. damn nice Haiku.. Someone is Special
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    Victoria Ceretto-Slotto said on February 19, 2011
    I like your interpretation and the association with Ninevah.
  9. Jamie Dedes said on February 21, 2011
    Truth here. Ditto Victoia. (liv2write2day).

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