lilting

Sophia
Divine Feminine: Sophia

her voice is calling
a lovebird wooing her mate
we yearn to respond

misunderstanding
mis-hearing and misery
miss, beloved’s call

gently she beckons
ever steadfast and faithful
craving our response

Daily Haiku #9
Word Challenge:  lilt
The Haiku Challenge

14 comments

  1. meethimirchi said on February 9, 2011
    very well described , beautiful
  2. PinkLady said on February 9, 2011
    what a lovely, haunting piece! :)
  3. North Texas Haiku said on February 9, 2011
    Wonderful play with words, especial in the second haiku. Lyrical!
  4. sarah malik said on February 9, 2011
    all ur three haiku's are written equally wonderfully...depicting an array of soo many emotions which i guess is a 'lilting' in itself :) beautiful!
  5. Mike Patrick said on February 9, 2011
    That is so beautiful, I can not find the words for a proper response.
  6. Someone is Special said on February 9, 2011
    masterpiece.. damn good Cloaed monk.. Someone is Special
  7. honeyhaiku said on February 9, 2011
    I think the comments above say it all, but I am going to have to steal "Masterpiece" from SIS...this is ART.
  8. trisha said on February 9, 2011
    just gorgeous, what will be more lilting than that. just adorable.
  9. RJ Clarken said on February 9, 2011
    This was really beautiful and so well-crafted!
  10. Jingle said on February 9, 2011
    very uplifting and elegant piece.
  11. Gerardine Baugh said on February 9, 2011
    Beautiful! Gerardine
  12. Life: Between the lines said on February 9, 2011
    the angel's call :( sorrowful read! :( http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/10/h-ku-10/
    1. Terri said on February 9, 2011
      I was looking at the hope, beauty, and love in knowing that the angel, lovebird, or divine, never stops calling. Sad that we turn away. Beautiful that the call continues lilting. Thanks!
  13. Becca Givens said on February 9, 2011
    Lifting and Divine~

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