joy of giving

15 comments

  1. granbee said on February 22, 2012
    Giving brings it back to us manifold, we are promised in His Holy Word. Giving connects us to the Eternal, the Holy One. Giving brings forth the reality of God With Us. Giving opens the light-arteries between His Heart and ours.
    1. Terri said on February 22, 2012
      Love the "light-arteries"
  2. Grace said on February 22, 2012
    If I may suggest you continue with two more sets as the form requires us to follow the pattern ~ The first verse is full of meaning though ~
    1. Terri said on February 22, 2012
      My interpretation of the form was different (what a surprise!). My take was each line beginning with the last line's ending. That is the pattern here and I think it is complete. So this is where it will stay. Thanks for your observation, though.
  3. Chevrefeuille said on February 22, 2012
    Love this one.
    1. Terri said on February 22, 2012
      Thank you so much! I don't know why, but when I wrote it I hated it. Then when I went back to it I thought, "hey...this isn't so bad after all!" Isn't it funny how our minds work?
  4. Ellecee said on February 22, 2012
    I like this take on today's theme. All things grow from seeds planted - of one kind or another.
  5. lolamouse said on February 22, 2012
    I liked the way you did this form with a different twist. Seems not so repetitive this way. Very thoughtful piece.
  6. Asni said on February 22, 2012
    Very insightful! Love it.
  7. Susie Clevenger said on February 22, 2012
    Yes very insightful...too often we don't partake of wisdom's gifts
  8. Ramesh Sood said on February 23, 2012
    seeds give more fruits fruits get nibbled by all all feel nourished nourished souls sing sing lovely songs of joy joy of giving love.. I felt so deeply inspired and wrote these... hope you like and accept it...I appreaciate your intervention and enjoyed it so much.. RS:)
    1. Terri said on February 23, 2012
      I love them.
  9. Valli said on February 23, 2012
    A beautiful haiku...And image is awesome! Thanks for sharing
  10. Vidya Sury said on February 23, 2012
    So pretty. I love your take on this form!
  11. Someone is Special said on February 24, 2012
    Beautiful Haiku Cloaked Monk.. Loved it..

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